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Unread 06-11-2021, 06:40 AM
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This poem took me straight to a line from one of my favourites - Samuel Butler's 'A Psalm of Montreal': Beauty crieth in an attic and no man regardeth. That, too is a poem about a classical sculpture suddenly discovered in a place that is unworthy of it and its relevance here is best illustrated by clicking on this link:

https://www.bartleby.com/library/poem/1065.html

Here you'll see the thought that made the poem - and then the poem itself. The former clear and exact, the latter spinning from it.

Now, as I read this one, I see what Joe means about it's wanting to become an essay but I feel that to some extent it already is an essay and wants to become a poem. A poem that takes me by a more vivid route to that great final line.
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