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Unread 07-13-2020, 09:57 AM
John Riley John Riley is online now
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Thanks for reading. I appreciate what you say. Getting the tone and narratives together in these short pieces is very much like writing poetry. They are poems more than fiction. I think everything you said is true. "I Never Knew" had been accepted by a journal so I'll have to wait to fix the problem you pointed out. It's still too subtle.

I'm working away on these pieces and your feedback is helpful.

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